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Seems pretty darn obvious to me

Posted: August 14th, 2008, 12:00 pm
by Doreen Peri
It's become quite evident, it's in the air.
You don't like me, and I don't care.

Posted: August 14th, 2008, 12:20 pm
by bennie2
it's become pretty obvious, it's in your care,
you feed me tea and tint my air

Posted: August 14th, 2008, 12:34 pm
by Doreen Peri
It doesn't take a scholar to figure it out.
I grate on your nerves, I have no doubt.
It's become quite evident, it's in the air.
You don't even care for my auburn hair.

Posted: August 14th, 2008, 12:39 pm
by bennie2
auburn hair curved past in a curl
the moon caught sight and his light unfurled
his shining blue light and her auburn hair
a match made in heaven - such a beautiful pair

Posted: August 14th, 2008, 1:28 pm
by mtmynd
you used to like me
that much is clear
but lately i feel
like shedding a tear

Posted: August 14th, 2008, 1:29 pm
by Doreen Peri
No match made in heaven, no match made at all.
You don't like me, it's easy to call.
It's written with exhaust from a skywriter's fumes.
It's written on the walls of your underground tomb.

You don't like me. So what? Oh well.
Who gives a shit? So long. Farewell.

Posted: August 14th, 2008, 1:37 pm
by mtmynd
boo hoo me
boo hoo you
thinking the worst
colors us blue

Posted: August 14th, 2008, 1:52 pm
by Doreen Peri
There's nothing to cry about, can't you see?
You don't like me, so now we're free.
No tears needed, it's true, you know.
Best to move on and let it go.

Posted: August 14th, 2008, 1:54 pm
by bennie2
It's written with exhaust from a skywriter's fumes.
great line, doreen.

Posted: August 14th, 2008, 2:00 pm
by mnaz
I'm exhausted.

Posted: August 14th, 2008, 2:05 pm
by Doreen Peri
Thanks bennie!

....

mnaz.... take a nap then.

Posted: August 14th, 2008, 2:21 pm
by mnaz
I can't. I have to go to work.

Posted: August 14th, 2008, 2:23 pm
by Doreen Peri
don't work too hard
enjoy your day
come back again
when you can play

:D

oh wow... gotta go find the rainbow!... nice thunderstorm and the sun just came out at the same time! yayyyyy!

Posted: August 14th, 2008, 2:34 pm
by bennie2
:lol:

just got an image of you, doreen, running around the streets looking for a rainbow like cathy running around on the moors...

Posted: August 15th, 2008, 11:49 pm
by Doreen Peri
I found the rainbow,
chased it 'round the block,
set my camera up,
took a shot

pointed it at me
with the rainbow in the back

and in the sky, i saw the
jet plane fumes
writing on the sky
like in an empty room

(no explanation,
but oh so clear)
it read like a trap,

"Yes, you're right. It's true.
I don't like you, my dear.
So what? What's new?"

I read it and thought,
ohmygod, this ain't fair

but hey..... to whoever wrote that crap,
all I can say is I really didn't care.
,
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