Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

i'm hanging
like a wilted flower
hanging inside my hair
hanging like a computer
overwhelmed
over here
over you

...someone is running naked over my heart and ringing bells and leaving cheese crumbs to feed me hungry and here i am. and there you are. and what? is this then when it's not just a poem

i'm hanging
inside my hair
but only for a little while longer
because i'm getting tired of this view

.

to get tired is good
to be comfortable too!
(sometimes)

I enjoyed it!!!

"and here i am. and there you are. and what?"

i like that line...

i like it all
very 3D

arcadia...the trouble with comfortzones is that they get uncomfortable sometimes... thanks for the "enjoyed"

axander...thank you kindly for reading and liking

miss judih! thank you. 3D... i like that

..someone is running naked over my heart and ringing bells and leaving cheese crumbs to feed me hungry

argghh, absolutely love the above lines.

SmileGRL, this tickled my fancy. Your poetry is the stuff of dreams.

John