The Digital Age

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Nazz
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The Digital Age

Post by Nazz » August 15th, 2008, 2:29 am

I witnessed that fateful battle,
when the pulleys fell to hordes of circuits.
Friction was forced underground and binary,
into uncountable blocks of bloodless digits.
Something changed.
The music sounded a bit more shiny,
the oaken vibration a bit more petrified,
the pain a little less real to the touch.
I can't put my finger on it.

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Post by Lightning Rod » August 15th, 2008, 3:14 am

Nazz

this is a very complete piece

like a mushroom is complete or a lichen

the subscript about the music is dead on

why do I like it?

I can't put my digit on it
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by constantine » August 15th, 2008, 9:06 am

yeah, i like it too. very insightful.

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Post by Nazz » August 15th, 2008, 4:11 pm

Thanks Clay and Dino. riffin' again, I see...

Cruise the Detroit boneyards.
Inhale rusted cables and toggles,
gunked-up carburetors and levers,
spring-loaded governors, hissing air.
Their descendants no longer run the show.
Rubber meets the road inside of a chip now.
Old time mechanics sit and reminisce,
slip slowly under the binary tide.

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Post by mtmynd » August 15th, 2008, 5:55 pm

the new millennium - high digital trumps mechanical.

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