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skytrain to nut house

Posted: August 15th, 2008, 2:51 pm
by Axanderdeath
She sits talking to her
friends
on the
sky train
waiting for
responses
to no one

“oh but she is a demon
a vampire!”
rasping laughter

insane people
fascinate me

I never make Eye
contact
in fear of contraction

GAP

Posted: August 15th, 2008, 3:16 pm
by Lightning Rod
this piece is totally mystifying to me subject-wise
I don't know what the fuck you are talking about
but I like the way it reads


'rasping laughter' has great percussion and sibilance.

Posted: August 15th, 2008, 4:47 pm
by Nazz
I pictured wacked-out woman talking to an invisible "sky train"...
Nice sketch.

Posted: August 15th, 2008, 5:58 pm
by mtmynd
i've seen a few of those types myself, altho not on the sky train...

Posted: August 16th, 2008, 2:39 am
by emel.scott
I always make eye conract, I'm just so lonely