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black and blue

Post by mtmynd » August 15th, 2008, 6:47 pm

<center>(((<u>black and blue</u>)))

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black - blue

black black black

blue

black black

blue.
blue.
blue.

black, black, black, black, black

blue

black blue blue blue black

[bl: ue(?) ack(?) ue(?) ack(?) ue ack(?)]

<u>black</u>(!) <u>black</u>(!) <u>black</u>(!)

~~RED~~

blue... blue...blue...

black - blue
black - blue
black - blue

whew

(whew)
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Post by Doreen Peri » August 15th, 2008, 7:08 pm

man, you beat me up with this one!

yowch! uh oh...... i'm bleeding!

no wait...

that's just ketchup

whew
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Post by mtmynd » August 15th, 2008, 9:06 pm

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Post by Lightning Rod » August 15th, 2008, 10:50 pm

<object width="425" height="344"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/v/3fcsUkLnULE&hl ... ram><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><embed src="http://www.youtube.com/v/3fcsUkLnULE&hl=en&fs=1" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowfullscreen="true" width="425" height="344"></embed></object>
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Post by the mingo » August 15th, 2008, 10:53 pm

Thunder under grass! I'm a word junkie! Sync me! Sync me!
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Post by emel.scott » August 16th, 2008, 2:30 am

I think the use of the word RED in line 13 confuses the reader
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Post by Perdida » August 16th, 2008, 7:03 pm

or perhaps it intrigues the reader :D
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