the moon is almost round again - for Arcadia

[Perdida]

The moon is almost round again


The moon is almost round again
dangling there, between seasons -

a pearl, bar-oque and overlooked
sitting pretty, outside of me
outside of you
in that devastating way that it does
on the edge of a long-narrow day

it bends me, riding the curves home
and i am held there
wearing the sky. its love-lines
and you.

©150808

p.s - Veronica, thank you for the inspire.

[emel.scott]

if only the brrr-oke could become round again....and they can!

riding the curves home
and i am held there
wearing the sky.

love this,

Scott

[Arcadia]

you´ve written my favourite moon-poem, poet!!!!!!

a pearl, bar-oque and overlooked
sitting pretty, outside of me
outside of you
in that devastating way that it does
on the edge of a long-narrow day


(I was looking again at the traslucent-indigo sky last night, bows & gracias to you, Perdida!!)

[Doreen Peri]

beautiful, maree!

[hester_prynne]

This is truly wonderful, a delightful read...
H

[Perdida]

Scott, oh indeed they can, over and again. Thank you!

Arcadia, bows & gracias to YOU!, thank you for the "favourite" I looked for her again (the moon) but our sky was dark and overcast, she was hidden. hugs



Doreen, thanks for the beautiful, darrling

hester, happy you were delighted, i thank you.

[mtmynd]

Perdida, I got caught up in this piece so smoothly and easily that I found myself asking "is it over?" while wanting just a few lines more...

Ain't inspiration a wonderful thing?

Thanks!

[Nazz]

Yes, I can see it from here, almost round again.
I wonder if it ever reaches the pure round.
Probably..

[constantine]

beautiful writing. this is getting to be a habit. you are a gifted poet.

[Perdida]

mtmynd, yanno, i was going to add more, but after i read it a few times over, i realised that i had said what i needed to say. Sure, there could've been more but i felt it wasn't neccessary. I thank you Sir. p.s and yes inspiration is a wonderful thing!

Nazz, "i wonder if it ever reaches the pure round" I wonder too, and like you, i say probably. Thank you for reading

Constantine, thanks for stopping by, for reading and your lovely compliment. You are too kind.