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the moon is almost round again - for Arcadia
Posted: August 16th, 2008, 7:59 am
by Perdida
The moon is almost round again
The moon is almost round again
dangling there, between seasons -
a pearl, bar-oque and overlooked
sitting pretty, outside of me
outside of you
in that devastating way that it does
on the edge of a long-narrow day
it bends me, riding the curves home
and i am held there
wearing the sky. its love-lines
and you.
©150808
p.s - Veronica, thank you for the inspire.
Posted: August 16th, 2008, 10:07 am
by emel.scott
if only the brrr-oke could become round again....and they can!
riding the curves home
and i am held there
wearing the sky.
love this,
Scott
Posted: August 16th, 2008, 10:37 am
by Arcadia
you´ve written my favourite moon-poem, poet!!!!!!
a pearl, bar-oque and overlooked
sitting pretty, outside of me
outside of you
in that devastating way that it does
on the edge of a long-narrow day
(I was looking again at the traslucent-indigo sky last night, bows & gracias to you, Perdida!!)
Posted: August 16th, 2008, 12:16 pm
by Doreen Peri
beautiful, maree!
Posted: August 16th, 2008, 5:34 pm
by hester_prynne
This is truly wonderful, a delightful read...
H
Posted: August 16th, 2008, 6:56 pm
by Perdida
Scott, oh indeed they can, over and again. Thank you!
Arcadia, bows & gracias to YOU!, thank you for the "favourite" I looked for her again (the moon) but our sky was dark and overcast, she was hidden. hugs
Doreen, thanks for the beautiful, darrling
hester, happy you were delighted, i thank you.
Posted: August 16th, 2008, 6:59 pm
by mtmynd
Perdida, I got caught up in this piece so smoothly and easily that I found myself asking "is it over?" while wanting just a few lines more...
Ain't inspiration a wonderful thing?
Thanks!
Posted: August 17th, 2008, 3:50 am
by Nazz
Yes, I can see it from here, almost round again.
I wonder if it ever reaches the pure round.
Probably..
Posted: August 17th, 2008, 7:23 am
by constantine
beautiful writing. this is getting to be a habit. you are a gifted poet.
Posted: August 18th, 2008, 6:09 pm
by Perdida
mtmynd, yanno, i was going to add more, but after i read it a few times over, i realised that i had said what i needed to say. Sure, there could've been more but i felt it wasn't neccessary. I thank you Sir.
p.s and yes inspiration is a wonderful thing!
Nazz, "i wonder if it ever reaches the pure round" I wonder too, and like you, i say probably. Thank you for reading
Constantine, thanks for stopping by, for reading and your lovely compliment. You are too kind.