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Artguy
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Pome # 3

Post by Artguy » August 24th, 2008, 10:49 pm

Pome 3

I sit waiting
Maybe for Godot
That great subconscious
Expectation
But Godot is
The famous no show
So let go
Let Godot fizzle
Into Space
It is
What Godot
Is
Empty space
No expectation
What is expected
Is empty of
Self
This meditation
Lightens my being

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Post by Lightning Rod » August 24th, 2008, 10:55 pm

nice meditation, kurt

I think Godot's middle name is Helium
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by stilltrucking » August 25th, 2008, 3:05 am

"Where shall I find a man who forgets about words and have a word with
him".
Chuang tzu.

Physics and Consciousness
That phrase empty space gets tossed around but it is something I cannot get my head around.

Is this a metaphor?

Empty space is like a Sunday without a stream from mtmynd.

No point is more central than this, that empty space is not empty. It is the seat of the most violent physics.~ John A. Wheeler
http://www.mattberntsen.net/content/Quotes.php

I wish you would write more pomes artguy
they are food for thought
and my quivering brain is always famished.

I realize I am drifting off on a tangent artguy

Mixing metaphors with apples and oranges.

Expectations and all that.


Sorry

I just need to get over it
and not expect to see another stream by Cecil
or another jam by wireman.

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Post by Doreen Peri » August 25th, 2008, 12:58 pm

"This meditation
Lightens my being"

and it lightened mine too.

Thank you.

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Post by Arcadia » August 25th, 2008, 2:04 pm

I guess only Beckett and some Aira´s books made me think "I can´t be reading this" and keep reading them anyway! :lol:

beautiful poem!!

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