Poetry is like a chimpanzee

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Nazz
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Poetry is like a chimpanzee

Post by Nazz » August 25th, 2008, 1:01 am

poetry screeches when it oughta be silent.
it scratches my cranium incessantly, flit flit.
it wakes me in a dream, impostor of a dream.
the scene takes too much work, the visual,
and that's not even the half life of it.
once you dig in, oh those metaphors.

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Post by constantine » August 25th, 2008, 9:58 am

flit flit is the bomb!

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Post by mnaz » August 25th, 2008, 11:44 am

** flit **

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Post by judih » August 25th, 2008, 11:45 am

those metaphors pile up
like a lucid dream told by terence mckenna
in soft sweet highspeak
appealing to inner flashbacks
been there done that, but wasn't it swell

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