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Poetry is like a chimpanzee

Posted: August 25th, 2008, 1:01 am
by Nazz
poetry screeches when it oughta be silent.
it scratches my cranium incessantly, flit flit.
it wakes me in a dream, impostor of a dream.
the scene takes too much work, the visual,
and that's not even the half life of it.
once you dig in, oh those metaphors.

Posted: August 25th, 2008, 9:58 am
by constantine
flit flit is the bomb!

Posted: August 25th, 2008, 11:44 am
by mnaz
** flit **

Posted: August 25th, 2008, 11:45 am
by judih
those metaphors pile up
like a lucid dream told by terence mckenna
in soft sweet highspeak
appealing to inner flashbacks
been there done that, but wasn't it swell