Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

i awake before the dawn.
sunrise puts its gown on,
rises slow above horizon's
reach.

i allow it to teach me anew,
life born through a window shade.

i trade midnight misperceptions
for the birth of daylight, eyes peer
right atop a clear late summer morn

and i repair what has been torn
with a glance of ray, become the
offering for the day,

lay myself open
to endless possibilities.
i do not beg but often
cry out please!


dp.9.4.08

excellent use of rhyme, doreen.

thanks dino

simple piece

i'm thinking i should change the cliche title

i think the title is right on .

It's night and I'm reading this.
I find myself looking forward to morning.

Really enjoyed this one Dor
H

Beautiful, Doreen. Simply beautiful.

Peace, Barry

thank you hest and Barry

Sunrise like the presence to witness it. Thanks Doreen.

Sounds a bit like William Butler Yeats there dp!!!! Loved it!!!!
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thank you nazz and dave..

thank you, doreen. left me warm.

lyrical - well almost

thank you, cecil!

sweetwater.... thank you .... i think. Well, almost... It's definitely lyrical. At least I hope so. I work hard on being lyrical.