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barefeet thru the mud
Posted: September 4th, 2008, 1:04 pm
by panta rhei
toes digging deep
into the soil
into the rich scent
of virgo earth
deepest marrow
welling up from
underneath our step
earth-hood: the inaccessible
ember
our feet wandering
on ancient murmur
while
betwen the swallow
and the
nameless bird
september
tears the sky
Posted: September 4th, 2008, 1:38 pm
by Doreen Peri
nice description
you took me there
happy birthday!
Posted: September 4th, 2008, 1:49 pm
by judih
toes reach out to roots
cool evening soil beckons approach
barefoot songs of home
Posted: September 4th, 2008, 7:53 pm
by panta rhei
let's dig deep
into the warm scent of
virgo earth
sink into
the murmur of the late
summer sun
sky vaster than ever
encloses us
opens us
suffuses us
and we drink
the gold that seeps
through these days' pores
taste with full kisses
our saffron souls
Posted: September 5th, 2008, 1:48 am
by hester_prynne
Delicious, devourable words.....!
And by the way, a happy birthday to you!
H
Posted: September 5th, 2008, 1:07 pm
by constantine
minimal, but yet dense with poetic imagery.
Posted: September 8th, 2008, 3:55 am
by Nazz
compelling images and thoughts, panta..
the inaccessible ember and ancient murmur.
we seem to have no direct access to either, yet we seem to be both.
Posted: September 8th, 2008, 1:21 pm
by sweetwater
speaks of places one has rarely seen