narcissism
Posted: September 8th, 2008, 1:29 pm
you're all pure geniuses of narciss
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Posted: September 8th, 2008, 2:56 pm
almost lyrical - on par with your classic sudep
Posted: September 15th, 2008, 1:21 am
Posted: September 16th, 2008, 1:13 am
"you're all pure geniuses of narciss"
I'd change the you're to you are...I think that flows better.
Aside from that, this is very clever I must say..this one liner poem. I can just see narcissus saying this outloud, as he looks at his own reflection.....
Well done.
H
I'd change the you're to you are...I think that flows better.
Aside from that, this is very clever I must say..this one liner poem. I can just see narcissus saying this outloud, as he looks at his own reflection.....
Well done.
H