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New Gravity

Posted: September 9th, 2008, 1:26 pm
by saw
I have this thing,
called intuitive toxicology
that tells me that
"safe levels"
of contaminants
are a contradiction
to my health
and rational thought.
I'm actually unmoved
by abstractions
in this case, rather it's
those infected monsters
that roam my neighborhood
clumsily dropping
body parts on my sidewalk
that I find disturbing,
the way they mingle
with the unsuspecting
population....how, I ask
do I balance this type
of gravity that doesn't
really ground me, instead
gives me pains
in my head and belly,
this new gravity that
calls for faith and trust
in drunken corporate frat boys
that have become oh so
comfortable telling epic lies,
that make the EPA the same
as Fox News guarding
the hen house, that tell us
homeland security
is making us safe by forcing
us to remove our stinky shoes
at the airport to stop
the spread of athletes feet...
I worry about this new gravity,
born in the comic political science
of bamboozler bush and his
twisted-lipped sister of ill repute,
the guy with the darth-dick surprise
under his semi-conscious skirt.....
gravity, gravity,
where are you ?

Posted: September 9th, 2008, 5:18 pm
by Perdida
I worry about this new gravity,
born in the comic political science
of bamboozler bush and his
twisted-lipped sister of ill repute,
the guy with the darth-dick surprise
under his semi-conscious skirt.....
all i can say bout this is...... Bloody Fantastic!......actually i'm standing and wooo-hoooing. Really really really good. :D

Posted: September 9th, 2008, 10:30 pm
by Lightning Rod
nice linguistic frolic, saw

now, back to my safe levels of contaminants :lol:

Posted: September 10th, 2008, 10:31 am
by saw
thanx a million Perdida, glad you got a charge from this one..what
more could a poet ask for

thanx LRod, appreciate your take and if you have an updated
chart on safe levels of contaminants, I need to know.....ha.....peace

Posted: September 10th, 2008, 8:05 pm
by hester_prynne
Like Perdida, I"m a woohooin too!
Fantastic read! Clean, clear and powerpacked!
H 8)

Posted: September 11th, 2008, 2:17 am
by saw
thanx hester.....kind words.....your a hoot yourself...peace....steve