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But You Already Knew This

Post by Lightning Rod » October 14th, 2008, 12:44 pm

i'm not nearly as concerned
with how much I know
as I am with what can be learned

the undiscovered, the undiscerned
the maiden not yet ravished
yearns to reveal her mystery

what fun is learning what we know?
in turn teaching it to ourselves
while memories burn like tissues in a candle

we have issues with things we cannot handle
the stern revelations, the spurned advances
so we return to learning what we've learned
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by Doreen Peri » October 14th, 2008, 1:03 pm

i'd rather learn how to paint
(not walls or ceilings or decks)
than to learn how to write code,
so what the heck,
the job won't pay much,
i'll live in a tent, perhaps,
but i ain't learnin' that code crap.

if there's one thing i've learned
throughout the years
it's to stick with what you know.
i'd rather not grow
if it means too much stress.

but you knew that already,
i guess.

....

enjoyed your poem lrod... :)

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Post by constantine » October 14th, 2008, 10:52 pm

you continue to impress me with your versatility. you're pretty smooth for a texan!

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Post by hester_prynne » October 16th, 2008, 10:04 pm

"the maiden not yet ravished.."
Love that...I mean, it hit the Gee flat minor chord within me....
:shock:
H 8)
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Post by Lightning Rod » October 16th, 2008, 10:16 pm

hester_prynne wrote:"the maiden not yet ravished.."
Love that...I mean, it hit the Gee flat minor chord within me....
:shock:
H 8)
ok hester, let's play it again
(can I call it an F# minor?)
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by hester_prynne » October 16th, 2008, 10:18 pm

Ha Ha!!!
Sure, call it F# you sharp noter you....
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Post by Lightning Rod » October 16th, 2008, 10:28 pm

one of my high school band directors used to say:

'If you you don't see sharp then you will B flat"
he always laughed at his own joke
and the rest of the band would just look crazy at each other
because they all knew that a C# is a Db, not a Bb
and a B# is a C, you see?
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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