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After the Fall

Posted: October 20th, 2008, 6:11 am
by saw
even though
my mind fermented
in a matrix
of varnish-like cocktails
and the patina
of my skin was the color
of puked-on cement,
I refused to feel sorry
for my earlier rapture,
but I did vow
to my fairy godmother
that I would never
behave that way again.
She's still laughing
in between newly
developed perpetual hiccups,
ha ha ha ha ha hick, ha ha
hick hick hick, ha ha ha ha ha.

Posted: October 20th, 2008, 8:58 am
by stilltrucking
6. nice

nice bit of craft

Posted: October 20th, 2008, 11:31 am
by mousey1
Great reading! Good fun.

So long as you didn't take the wheel of your Pumpkin Carriage and try to drive yourself home, it's good to tie one on occasionally...besides, that ol' fairy Godmother begins to look pretty good after a few drinks! :P

Posted: October 20th, 2008, 2:26 pm
by Nazz
Sounds like last Sunday mornin'... And yes, she's still laughing...

hahahahahahahahahahahahah..

Posted: October 22nd, 2008, 3:39 pm
by saw
thanx truck, mouse and nazz...just having a little fun...a friend of mine at work and I always say after such an episode,"Man, I learned my lesson!"

Posted: October 23rd, 2008, 5:29 pm
by SmileGRL
bloody mary :wink:

Posted: October 23rd, 2008, 7:02 pm
by goldenmyst
Saw, merrily besotted. Though I've never been drunk, your poem almost makes me wanna try. ;)

John

Posted: October 28th, 2008, 1:54 am
by hester_prynne
melaffing.
good stuff as usual
H 8)