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World Domination (Autumn)

Posted: October 31st, 2008, 1:29 am
by Nazz
Ocean on a lit leaf,
between dampening breaths.
Curl slightly in cold, restless repose.
Reflect distant electricity unknown,
or translucent pools like Rilke,
pure liquid until flight.

Posted: October 31st, 2008, 10:12 am
by SmileGRL
a world captured inside a wet leaf. i like that it can be restless with lightening or transculent like a pool depending on how you look at it. enjoyed the more "old school" style too.

Posted: October 31st, 2008, 1:23 pm
by mtmynd
a nice way to reveal a new perspective that has reached you.

i like this...

Posted: October 31st, 2008, 1:28 pm
by Nazz
Thanks Smile and Cecil.. Sometimes ya just get tossed here and there by the cool Autumn breaths. On the AC I read how Rilke inspired Cenacle... read Rilke's 'Going Blind'. The cool breaths filled my window until a pause, and then I noticed the leaf..