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Until Then, I'm Just Crazy
Posted: November 1st, 2008, 11:34 am
by Lightning Rod
if I had the money I would be an eccentric
until then, I'm just crazy
I could sequester myself in a penthouse
if I had the funds
grow my nails until they curl
hire mormons to fetch me fast food and codeine
I could sail a balloon round the world
disappear mysteriously
leave a fortune to my cat
if only I had a fortune to leave
I could be an eccentric
until then, I'm just crazy
Posted: November 1st, 2008, 12:14 pm
by Doreen Peri
I like this poem. Clever .... in a Howard Hughs sorta way
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suggestion... if you're going to say "until then, I'm just crazy" why don't you change it to "when I have money, I will be eccentric"?
would read better to me
just an opinion
Posted: November 1st, 2008, 3:18 pm
by constantine
it has a stand up comic feel that i think the title reinforces.
Posted: November 1st, 2008, 4:28 pm
by stilltrucking
A poem, I can relate to, a lot.
If I was rich I could be buried in a
Ferrari in stead of a cardboard box.
I liked the title too.
sincerely
crazy jack
son of crazy mike
Posted: November 2nd, 2008, 10:08 pm
by hester_prynne
Wheee heee, now this makes me dance...
Love this LRod....could be a song for sure.
H
Posted: November 3rd, 2008, 6:01 pm
by SmileGRL
maybe life is too short to try and please everyone all the time. or to be "normal"...anne hathaway said "we all have a freak side that we need to display proudly"...be you, proudly, even if a little offbeat/eccentric/freaky. of course it's a lot more fun when you're rich. heh
LRod...i like this poem a lot. it's catchy
