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Percocet Conquistador

Posted: November 7th, 2008, 4:42 pm
by Artguy
the percocet blues
the rhythm in my brain
tinnitus and pulse
going with the friday flow
nowhere else to go
walk this floor
till the hardwood shines
sleep with Mexican blanket
pulled to my throbbing ears
quench my dream fears
aztecs speak to me
a conquistador
armour blinded
from temple sun
image on the run
blood trickles
from the corners of
twisted thought
awake

Posted: November 8th, 2008, 2:38 pm
by mtmynd
hell of a write, artguy...

Posted: November 8th, 2008, 7:00 pm
by stilltrucking
I wish I knew what to say


I hope you found some relief
in writng your poem

"angel in green
sister morphine"

Posted: November 8th, 2008, 11:17 pm
by judih
the work is fine
some painfully strong images
so painful i can hear myself bleed

Posted: November 9th, 2008, 5:25 am
by mnaz
Life = pain?

But it's so sweet though..
It vibrates, it pulses.

Posted: November 9th, 2008, 3:10 pm
by Arcadia
it has paracetamol, it would easily kill me! :lol:

(your poem reminded me instantly to Cortázar´s tale "La noche boca arriba"! :), gracias!! )

Posted: November 9th, 2008, 3:38 pm
by constantine
this is top rate.

Posted: November 9th, 2008, 10:53 pm
by hester_prynne
Excellent, moving, vivid....and more.
Wowed.
H 8)

Posted: November 11th, 2008, 2:39 pm
by SmileGRL
nightmare-ish...hope you feel better!