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kung fu plastic

Posted: November 18th, 2008, 12:33 am
by Lightning Rod
kung fu plastic
the stuff of condoms
deft movements
elastic bowel ornament

an ointment of pure
ballistic hologram
game machine exercise
real as a pixel dream

a Darwin selection for
stupidity and a willingness to spend
on cosmetic and needless clothing
Walmart Divas and Divos

fat before their time on
kung fu plastic
sit com Home Depot
and dow jones elastic

Posted: November 18th, 2008, 1:18 am
by K&D
rubber balls, plastic nose
buy yourself a hose
and hope it grows.

leaky pipes, dried up damns?
its a cyborg surge
a postmodern catamaran


(the beining of you poem evoked a lot of imagry, i think i could probably write a whole poem about the images it evokes. I read an article by Marksimpson about his blog that says were becoming Clonosexual because of fasion etc etc....link here http://www.marksimpson.com/

I like his writting a lot, he writes like your post too...not poetry you know your prose. )

I most have liked the poem, it managed to inspire some sort of peotic response and i seem to be such a slow writter these days.

Posted: November 18th, 2008, 2:24 am
by Nazz
A big old house of kung fu plastic is teetering. The army of good little consumer units powers the whole system, but it's squeezed and over-leveraged. I wouldn't want to be a "retailer" right now.. well, except for maybe Wal Mart-- (cheap stuff).

Posted: November 18th, 2008, 2:06 pm
by stilltrucking
I like it a lot but I think nigger rich would be a better title