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Laying on of Hands
Posted: December 5th, 2008, 10:16 pm
by Barry
Two different hands
female hands
Laid over a knife
the hilt of a knife
Buried in a back
a male back
Posted: December 6th, 2008, 1:17 pm
by Doreen Peri
Murder, especially between the sexes, makes for an intriguing topic.
I like this, Barry, because it leaves the reader open to imagining what the heck he did to piss her off enough to off him.
nice to see you
Posted: December 6th, 2008, 1:27 pm
by Lightning Rod
my back has no knife wounds
but there are many high-heel marks
I earned them
Posted: December 6th, 2008, 6:17 pm
by Nazz
seems like a metaphor.
Posted: December 6th, 2008, 10:20 pm
by goldenmyst
Barry, your ability to use concise words to convey powerful emotions is demonstrated here. I too see it as a metaphor. Kudos my friend.
John
Posted: December 7th, 2008, 7:53 am
by MrGuilty
Women scare the hell out of me.
When they unite against their common enemy
Posted: December 11th, 2008, 1:50 pm
by Barry
It's a stark image they lingers long after the actual event.
Thanks for the comments.
Peace,
Barry
Posted: December 13th, 2008, 8:34 am
by SmileGRL
...very vivid image barry. ouch