the thought was consumed by a sloth

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mtmynd
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the thought was consumed by a sloth

Post by mtmynd » December 26th, 2008, 8:00 pm

i really tried to write a poem,
a novel, an essay... anything
but this is all there is today
sheepishly creeping out from
the tips of my fingers like the
midnight sloth in an elm tree

creativesoul
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sloth

Post by creativesoul » December 26th, 2008, 9:12 pm

i am not sure what is wrose
my own lazines or someone else s
but i always like what you write
i have never seen you as slothful
instead i see you full and beautiful
weaving words together
expressing yourself
perhaps the way other s see us is in a better light

mtmynd
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Post by mtmynd » December 27th, 2008, 12:23 pm

thx, c-soul, very much.

consciousness takes no respite
only the body to communicate it

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Post by stilltrucking » December 29th, 2008, 3:15 am

:D

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