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the thought was consumed by a sloth

Posted: December 26th, 2008, 8:00 pm
by mtmynd
i really tried to write a poem,
a novel, an essay... anything
but this is all there is today
sheepishly creeping out from
the tips of my fingers like the
midnight sloth in an elm tree

sloth

Posted: December 26th, 2008, 9:12 pm
by creativesoul
i am not sure what is wrose
my own lazines or someone else s
but i always like what you write
i have never seen you as slothful
instead i see you full and beautiful
weaving words together
expressing yourself
perhaps the way other s see us is in a better light

Posted: December 27th, 2008, 12:23 pm
by mtmynd
thx, c-soul, very much.

consciousness takes no respite
only the body to communicate it

Posted: December 29th, 2008, 3:15 am
by stilltrucking
:D