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The Bum & I

Post by Artguy » January 1st, 2009, 1:34 pm

I realize this is an older piece and I had posted it here sometime ago, but my mind now turns to these people...


THE BUM AND I

Well there he is
And I am here
Separated only by this window
A bum with no fear

The street hustles by
Perched on this stool
Grande latte in my cup
A coin or two in his
Hard to look up

He stands stoic, ragged
A long gray coat
Once worn by success
Subway grates stamped in it’s back
We both seem a mess

Hair like straw
Worn thin
Slit eyes peering through the ages
Sun leather skin

Kicks a little dance
For his day
Jester for court of financial fools
Bankers, lawyers
Ladies in jewels

I see them, but I don’t
This one captures me
Shanghaied me
Transfixed me
What does he see

My coffee is warm
Comforting
Crowds herd by
North and south
Bow my head and sigh

Words begin to pile in my mind
What are his
Still his cup is silent
Another quick step, hop
Back curved to the street, he’s bent


My cup is empty too
Stare into untelling bottom
Lift my head to see the bum’s imploring cup
Downtown wind and dust got him

Shall I do as always
Look away
Afraid to see
It could be me

The shanghai bum
To him I flip a dollar coin
Thunk in his cup
Look him in his ascetic eyes thanks for the poem I nod
A little dance in his cup

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Post by Doreen Peri » January 1st, 2009, 1:50 pm

A fine piece, Kurt!

When I see a street person, I often recognize myself.... it could be me, I think... it could be.... hoping it won't be but hey, ya never know. Life can change on a dime.

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Post by Lightning Rod » January 1st, 2009, 2:10 pm

yes, very evocative piece kurt
I remember reading it before
then, as now, it reminded me of this:

http://www.studioeight.tv/musicpost/LR/bogangles.mp3
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by mtmynd » January 1st, 2009, 4:09 pm

worth reading again, Kurt. we're always so close to that street that having a full belly does little to sway the thought "it could be me." yes. it could. especially given the times we're in.

eLRod, you really wrapped yourself into that song. nice work... very nice...

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Post by mnaz » January 3rd, 2009, 6:39 am

I always try to do what I can at the time, always thinking it should be more. I know it should be more. I know some of these people now... well, I don't know them well, but I recognize them, talk to them sometimes. There's a guy who looks just like Ed Abbey who hangs out by the liquor store, a vet. He's never read Ed Abbey. I keep forgetting to lend him a copy of 'Desert Solitaire'..

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Post by SmileGRL » January 6th, 2009, 3:19 pm

watch this movie: "the pursuit of happiness"

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