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Give Me

Posted: January 3rd, 2009, 3:26 am
by K&D
Show me something, anything
I’ll be the mouse play with your prey.
Take me for a spin
Maybe it’ll give you a grin.

Convince me your worth knowing.
I might just let you
tickle me pink.

You think you can keep my attention?
What makes you so interesting?

Posted: January 3rd, 2009, 11:13 am
by constantine
cool.

Posted: January 3rd, 2009, 2:50 pm
by Doreen Peri
sounds like fun! ;)

i like this...

"I might just let you
tickle me pink."

Posted: January 3rd, 2009, 3:27 pm
by K&D
yeah dor, i love that line too.

I'm normally a pretty self depricating person but i wrote that line and smiled gave myself a little mental pat on the back.

i think with sometime this could be awesome, right now its just something that litterally i just sat down and wrote, which is unusual, i'm not really a first thought best thought writer as muchh as i would like to be.

I'm an old school reviser.

Posted: January 3rd, 2009, 6:21 pm
by Perdida
it seems someone's already got yur attention and doesnt need to try hard to keep it either.....*grin*

enjoy your writes

m :D

Posted: January 3rd, 2009, 9:57 pm
by K&D
maybe the person i've already found is me though? But i say if you can't entertain yourself you certainly can't entertain anyone else, and this way i'l never be bored.

perdida where have you been? glad to hear from you.

Posted: January 5th, 2009, 3:57 pm
by Perdida
if you can't entertain yourself you certainly can't entertain anyone else
True, yes but....that would also depend on what kind of entertainment.

where have i been? wish i could say somewhere special, but nope just home... been busy painting, getting ready for xmas/new year etc.
How bout YOU?

please call me maree.
:D

Posted: January 5th, 2009, 6:06 pm
by K&D
Maree,

I have been with family, lots of them- i come from a recently divorced family and the dynamics are weird. but thats what makes life interesting.

you've caught me too- I thought for a second perhaps i had found someone to peak my interest thusly the short poem. She was older but not wiser- now shes just plain pissed.

She didn't want to play for playing sake, she was looking for commitment for commitment sake. she talked about herself incesently and even when i did get a word in she wouldn't engage with what i was saying, or ask questions...just go on and try to bring it back to her. I was rushing to get out what little i said out of fear of her cutting me off.


Two dates. She talked for hours, I tried to be coy/playfull with her, she acted like no one had ever flirted with her before, it was bad just bad.

oh well I LIVE TO LOVE ANOTHER DAY....with other people :)

I guess i'll just write a poem.

Posted: January 5th, 2009, 7:49 pm
by Bardmaster
an interesting beat, and quite direct. liked

Posted: January 10th, 2009, 4:24 pm
by Perdida
that's the thing K&D..there's always another day, and other people. :D

Posted: January 13th, 2009, 3:17 pm
by sweetwater
I've studied now Philosophy
And Jurisprudence, Medicine,—
And even, alas! Theology,—
From end to end, with labor keen;
And here, poor fool! with all my lore
I stand, no wiser than before:

Posted: January 13th, 2009, 4:38 pm
by Nazz
I'm not interesting.
Interesting is boring.