Page 1 of 1

shine and spell

Posted: January 7th, 2009, 6:38 pm
by sweetwater
The floor plans of phase one ...
the spiral and scroll curled underneath a compass
as an architecture of the mind

as simple in phrase and music
counting syllables
in a wine glass and synonyms

the square as first amongst fools
to symbolize the overture
and create a sign

the rest was deciphered by design
as passage or staircase
ladders to a nether plan and world

she first stepped into a mess
seeing first a room the candle light and dress
having last seen everything she did contest

wearing upon her crown
a jewel case and locked drawer
in all one’s memories

a box
and dreams stolen
by men with swords

Posted: January 7th, 2009, 6:51 pm
by Doreen Peri
Gawd this is beautiful!

Wonderful phrasing, images, meter ... subtle rhymes... rolls off the tongue

and there are levels of meaning here that challenge the mind

It's a really nice piece. I'll read it several times.