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Posted: January 13th, 2009, 3:13 pm
by sweetwater
Speak not to me of yonder motley masses,
Whom but to see, puts out the fire of Song!
Hide from my view the surging crowd that passes,
And in its whirlpool forces us along!
No, lead me where some heavenly silence glasses
The purer joys that round the Poet throng,—
Where Love and Friendship still divinely fashion
The bonds that bless, the wreaths that crown his passion!
Ah, every utterance from the depths of feeling
The timid lips have stammeringly expressed,—
Now failing, now, perchance, success revealing,—
Gulps the wild Moment in its greedy breast;
Or oft, reluctant years its warrant sealing,
Its perfect stature stands at last confessed!
What dazzles, for the Moment spends its spirit:
What's genuine, shall Posterity inherit.

Posted: January 13th, 2009, 3:55 pm
by Doreen Peri
Almost flawless iambic pentameter.

Lovely verse.

Posted: January 13th, 2009, 4:03 pm
by Lightning Rod
my chapeau is off

Posted: January 13th, 2009, 11:31 pm
by mtmynd
classical styling that delivers.

nice one, sweetwater.

Posted: January 14th, 2009, 12:21 am
by K&D
imagine i'm saying this outloud a-la surfer voice

"sweetwater, bringin da historical context to (his/her/Zi's work- way to go sweetwater"

i don't know why that had to be said a-la surfer dude but in my head thats how i would have said it outloud.

your biological male no sweetwater?

also- its always the timid lips....just like the quiet ones and those still waters.

Posted: January 15th, 2009, 12:16 am
by hester_prynne
Indeed sweetwater, a sweet river of verse.
H 8)