Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

It was nothing but a brush of dust,
a quick ice trick, fickle as
a lover's glance. I ventured out,
took a chance, arrived uneventfully.
No fear here. It was a mere hallucination.

as it should be! Madness.



if only i could write as sucinct as yourself....love love loved this one.

thanks very much K&D

I've been enjoying your new poems, too ... good to see you back hanging out some!

love those images, doreen.
they paint themselves inside my mind!

don't try the old ice trick on me

Thanks you all..

i actually edited it and expanded upon it to create a series of 5 ... this piece became #1 but it's different now

http://www.studioeight.tv/phpbb/viewtopic.php?t=15544

the short version got lost in the long one. not that it wasn't all brilliant, just...i like this verse being it's own thing.

this is quite different
standing alone nicely...but



none of my hallucinations were" mere",
so I don't get that part completely

thanks smilegrl ... yeah i think it stands alone ok too.. just used it to bounce off of

......

predictions sometimes don't happen

your hallucinations aren't mine

thanks for reading, walt

glad you enjoyed it

A chimera in the mind's eye. I often wonder if those prone to hallucinations, not drug induced, would be more at ease, if they didn't have to worry about it.

John