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Post by Doreen Peri » January 18th, 2009, 9:56 am

It sure happens quick around here.
I am just an extra in your hollywood movie.
i feel like i'm disappearing every time
i cross the street.
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Post by Arcadia » January 18th, 2009, 10:03 am

:lol: mmm.... are you sure is hollywood?

enjoyed! :wink:
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Post by mtmynd » January 18th, 2009, 1:50 pm

i liked the brevity of this... still do.
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Post by stilltrucking » January 18th, 2009, 3:37 pm

Insightful poem
It made me feel like a star

I love the succinctnity of it too
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Post by alienpoet » January 28th, 2009, 10:26 pm

yeah....Yeah.
read me, but don't play me backwards

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