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don't get on my mind

Post by alienpoet » January 28th, 2009, 11:30 pm

wish
my
shoulders
weren't broken
then
i
could
carry you
read me, but don't play me backwards

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Post by hester_prynne » January 29th, 2009, 1:26 am

This is BLAM! good.
It just...is
H 8)
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Post by alienpoet » January 29th, 2009, 8:09 pm

thank u H!!!
read me, but don't play me backwards

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