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mnaz
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Post by mnaz » January 30th, 2009, 6:09 pm

Salsa Marimba.
Mambo mambo mambo.
Got a pistol in his secret shoe.
Gleem teeth tango assassin.
Sinister minister of heat.
Jet black Latin sleek.
Samba samba.
Marimba!
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Post by K&D » January 30th, 2009, 7:43 pm

you ever seen samba?

Its strange because the movemnts are fast and yet you look like your not moving.

I liked the end of this one- is it weird for me to say it seemed to have a taste to it?
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Post by mnaz » January 30th, 2009, 8:25 pm

Yeah K&D... Taste is good... I had a yen for a taco when I wrote this... Hey! It's sort of like a companion piece to yours! I like it!
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Post by K&D » January 30th, 2009, 8:37 pm

I had the oppertunity to try to learn samba from a young brazilian women i was very much into....she just laughed!

I'd get it right for two seconds and loose it! samba is amazing.
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