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you can think,.,

Posted: January 31st, 2009, 7:30 pm
by mtmynd
what? you don't think anymore?
not that thinking promises anything
just a way to put things in perspective
forcing logic to work despite the truth

but come on now... this is too much
you can't really mean this crap
it sounds like youve been locked down
in some vocabulary of yesteryear and forgot
to open the door that you always swore
was locked and you were some prisoner

but you gotta know this is just not true
you can think... i know you can.. really
just open up your fucking head and shhhh...

watch those things fly outta that attic mind
and look at what is remaining in the corners
and in front of all the windows that opened up

too many head trips that stay only there
in the head with no way to get out like that
that prisoner you have become and see as
a dead end to all your living and breathing

light that light
see the shadows dissipate
light that light
see the shadows dissipate
light that light
see the shadows dissipate

Posted: January 31st, 2009, 8:06 pm
by Doreen Peri
bravo!

i can think! and i think i like it! ... no, i know i do! ;)

Posted: January 31st, 2009, 9:07 pm
by mtmynd
you're sure pretty when you smile... ;)

Posted: January 31st, 2009, 10:51 pm
by justwalt
this resembles the twice daily conversations I have
with my two teenage stepdaughters.....
but I remove the association when I say that I like
this....a lot.

Posted: January 31st, 2009, 11:09 pm
by mtmynd
i gotta kick outta your reply, justwalt.

glad you enjoyed. thx.

Posted: January 31st, 2009, 11:17 pm
by justwalt
I cannot tell a lie...too often.

Posted: February 1st, 2009, 12:44 am
by hester_prynne
As usual, I totally love this write Cec.
It soars me!
H 8)

Posted: February 1st, 2009, 1:13 am
by mtmynd
you'll find me blushing when i read your replies, my dear Hes. thank you... very much... blushing makes me feel so... real. ;)

Posted: February 2nd, 2009, 3:02 pm
by SmileGRL
kinda like "wake up! and sMeLL the coffee." heh 8)

Posted: February 12th, 2009, 1:10 pm
by goldenmyst
I can think. It just ends up being skewed. The the thought images are like the distortions in a hall of mirrors at an amusement park. Yet I think therefore I am.

John