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doN't speak. juSt kiss

Posted: February 5th, 2009, 6:39 pm
by SmileGRL
shh! doN't speak
just kiss me
like you've wanted to
for sO long
your tongue will be
my waTer
your liPs, my oXygen
& i will be
a droWning aNgel
haNging on your whiM

***
aRt on my blog...

Posted: February 5th, 2009, 8:37 pm
by mtmynd
i love when you talk like that. ;)

Posted: February 5th, 2009, 8:55 pm
by Lightning Rod
I'm being as quiet as I can
where do you want it?

very seductive, mj

Posted: February 5th, 2009, 9:33 pm
by justwalt
justwet
justwild
justwicked
justwishful
justwhipme
justwantmore
justwearmeout
justwringmeout

Posted: February 5th, 2009, 9:55 pm
by K&D
I love poetry that evokes an emotion of the person writting it.

I like that you can feel it.

I liked this poem a lot.

its always hard to know when to play it cool 8)

Posted: February 5th, 2009, 10:59 pm
by K&D
I wrote this after an interesting night, i think they team up well like a conversation.

My feet are in my shoes
Under these lights anything could be true.

I act like I’m not sold
You smell good, I’ve got to withhold.

Your making my head spin
I’m talking but I don’t know out of which end.

I can feel the buds on your tongue
i'll just wait for you and I to catch my lungs

Posted: February 6th, 2009, 3:24 am
by izeveryboyin
your tongue will be
my waTer
your liPs, my oXygen
Beautiful.

Posted: February 6th, 2009, 10:33 am
by SmileGRL
cecil...i love when you reply liKe that :wink:


clay...on the avatar please :mrgreen:


...JustWalt 8)


KD...our emotions are our poetry, if we let it speak. thanks for the "conversation" :wink:


izB...thank you kindly for the "beautiful" 8)

Posted: February 6th, 2009, 6:51 pm
by goldenmyst
That would be an invitation I couldn't refuse. ;) Kissing was never so exciting than as depicted here.

John

Posted: February 7th, 2009, 8:11 am
by Arcadia
I like when you give orders, smilegrl!!!!!! :lol:

beautiful!!!!!!! :D

Posted: February 12th, 2009, 4:44 pm
by SmileGRL
john, arcadia...*she blows them kisses & grins* :P

Posted: February 13th, 2009, 5:52 pm
by bennie2
I'm constantly amazed that this isn't your first language, marjeanne.

you use it beautifully.

Posted: February 18th, 2009, 2:42 pm
by SmileGRL
thank you. so much