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doN't speak. juSt kiss
Posted: February 5th, 2009, 6:39 pm
by SmileGRL
shh! doN't speak
just kiss me
like you've wanted to
for sO long
your tongue will be
my waTer
your liPs, my oXygen
& i will be
a droWning aNgel
haNging on your whiM
***
aRt on my blog...
Posted: February 5th, 2009, 8:37 pm
by mtmynd
i love when you talk like that.

Posted: February 5th, 2009, 8:55 pm
by Lightning Rod
I'm being as quiet as I can
where do you want it?
very seductive, mj
Posted: February 5th, 2009, 9:33 pm
by justwalt
justwet
justwild
justwicked
justwishful
justwhipme
justwantmore
justwearmeout
justwringmeout
Posted: February 5th, 2009, 9:55 pm
by K&D
I love poetry that evokes an emotion of the person writting it.
I like that you can feel it.
I liked this poem a lot.
its always hard to know when to play it cool

Posted: February 5th, 2009, 10:59 pm
by K&D
I wrote this after an interesting night, i think they team up well like a conversation.
My feet are in my shoes
Under these lights anything could be true.
I act like I’m not sold
You smell good, I’ve got to withhold.
Your making my head spin
I’m talking but I don’t know out of which end.
I can feel the buds on your tongue
i'll just wait for you and I to catch my lungs
Posted: February 6th, 2009, 3:24 am
by izeveryboyin
your tongue will be
my waTer
your liPs, my oXygen
Beautiful.
Posted: February 6th, 2009, 10:33 am
by SmileGRL
cecil...i love when you reply liKe that
clay...on the avatar please
...
Just
Walt
KD...our emotions are our poetry, if we let it speak. thanks for the "conversation"
izB...thank you kindly for the "beautiful"

Posted: February 6th, 2009, 6:51 pm
by goldenmyst
That would be an invitation I couldn't refuse.

Kissing was never so exciting than as depicted here.
John
Posted: February 7th, 2009, 8:11 am
by Arcadia
I like when you give orders, smilegrl!!!!!!
beautiful!!!!!!!

Posted: February 12th, 2009, 4:44 pm
by SmileGRL
john, arcadia...*she blows them kisses & grins*

Posted: February 13th, 2009, 5:52 pm
by bennie2
I'm constantly amazed that this isn't your first language, marjeanne.
you use it beautifully.
Posted: February 18th, 2009, 2:42 pm
by SmileGRL
thank you. so much