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I liked it...here's why
I like how you use expressions that are you know pop culture refrences/funny little sides and its different then nessisarily emotional-but no less true, and i like how this used those little refrences but expressed/fit with the theme...i mean it worked. you know if your writting about love using funny little pop culture refrences makes it feel a certain way...but this felt like it fit w/message...etc. I thought it was sweet but smart and funny= gender wise- I'd say i admire/would like to be like a smart/funny yet sweet old man+ charming- i know that weird but i've gotten over feeling a need to explain it to myself or others. I think thats why i liked/like you when i was younger-
hard to explain.
i have an interesting"valentines day" poem i'm working on- i feel i'm out of my "intimacy phase" its weird cause i don't know what poems will look like now= i'm just over it- not intimacy by anymeans but you know like writting in that mode- also perhaps i'm spent.
I like how you use expressions that are you know pop culture refrences/funny little sides and its different then nessisarily emotional-but no less true, and i like how this used those little refrences but expressed/fit with the theme...i mean it worked. you know if your writting about love using funny little pop culture refrences makes it feel a certain way...but this felt like it fit w/message...etc. I thought it was sweet but smart and funny= gender wise- I'd say i admire/would like to be like a smart/funny yet sweet old man+ charming- i know that weird but i've gotten over feeling a need to explain it to myself or others. I think thats why i liked/like you when i was younger-
hard to explain.
i have an interesting"valentines day" poem i'm working on- i feel i'm out of my "intimacy phase" its weird cause i don't know what poems will look like now= i'm just over it- not intimacy by anymeans but you know like writting in that mode- also perhaps i'm spent.
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