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Lonely Box
Posted: February 13th, 2009, 5:25 pm
by Lightning Rod
my email box is empty
until I hear from you
oh, the usual things are there
I can grow my penis three inches
get herbal remedies
meet mature singles in my area
but until I hear from you
my email box is empty
I can work from home
do background searches
get a degree in penology
or credit cards with no limit
but until I hear from you
my email box is empty
Posted: February 14th, 2009, 12:08 am
by K&D
I liked it...here's why
I like how you use expressions that are you know pop culture refrences/funny little sides and its different then nessisarily emotional-but no less true, and i like how this used those little refrences but expressed/fit with the theme...i mean it worked. you know if your writting about love using funny little pop culture refrences makes it feel a certain way...but this felt like it fit w/message...etc. I thought it was sweet but smart and funny= gender wise- I'd say i admire/would like to be like a smart/funny yet sweet old man+ charming- i know that weird but i've gotten over feeling a need to explain it to myself or others. I think thats why i liked/like you when i was younger-
hard to explain.
i have an interesting"valentines day" poem i'm working on- i feel i'm out of my "intimacy phase" its weird cause i don't know what poems will look like now= i'm just over it- not intimacy by anymeans but you know like writting in that mode- also perhaps i'm spent.
Posted: February 14th, 2009, 2:40 am
by alienpoet
i'm finding this so sad and so relatable ...if that's even a word.I can dig this write ...cause i go thru it...oh yeah.
Posted: February 14th, 2009, 5:20 pm
by mnaz
interesting, that 'work from home' thing.
that's pretty much a can't miss deal.
we gotta 'work from home', eh?
Ok so I'm temporarily Canadian.
Posted: February 14th, 2009, 7:39 pm
by justwalt
sorry LRod, but I love it when these's no mail.