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brumal arborescentity
Posted: February 16th, 2009, 7:16 pm
by panta rhei
we meet
in the electric dawn
of the declining year
bare-faced
bare-hearted
and nude
our branches naked
unsecured
roots shuddering
in frozen earth
and forest flow
inside our bark
warm like hope
dreams of birth
stark naked
in cold winter air
we shiver
as our branches
touch
Posted: February 16th, 2009, 7:55 pm
by Arcadia
so beautiful, anemone!!!!! gracias for sharing !!!!!!
Posted: February 17th, 2009, 2:29 pm
by Nazz
A lot going on in so few words. The consciousness of all nature. The seasons, the cycles, death and rebirth. I became part of that cold, vivid scene. I felt the same deep shudder I always feel at that dying time of year, and life and warmth turned inside. Made me think and feel. Thanks.
Posted: February 17th, 2009, 6:27 pm
by mtmynd
nicely done, panta... i'm still shivering.
Posted: February 18th, 2009, 12:25 am
by stilltrucking
what lingers for me is the textures, bark, skin. branch fingertips touching
beautiful poem
it gave me goose bumps
gracias
Posted: February 18th, 2009, 1:21 am
by hester_prynne
Indeed I love this....
It's wonderful.
H
Posted: February 19th, 2009, 11:01 am
by SmileGRL
"naked" and touching is how we are meant to be...
"our branches"...great visual. organic. one with nature.
"warm like hope/dreams of birth/stark naked"...this whole poem is magical and spiritual and touching deep inside of me.
cold...yes, it is winter here and i feel the cold shuddering/shivering through me.