Semblance of Sexuality

Post by **goldenmyst** » February 22nd, 2009, 11:26 am

Mirrored subconscious archetypes
Encircle my libido with laughing clowns
Yet I continue sans sensual
With my pockets empty of love
Waning simulacrum of sanity
Seduces symbiotically
Simple sacraments suffice
For sustainable ecosystem

Post by **Lightning Rod** » February 22nd, 2009, 1:10 pm

neat tongue twister, john

Post by **Arcadia** » February 22nd, 2009, 1:10 pm

kind of green-peace poem g.myst

, I enjoyed it!!!!

Post by **mtmynd** » February 22nd, 2009, 1:29 pm

say that outloud ten times!

good write, John.

Post by **goldenmyst** » February 24th, 2009, 4:42 pm

Lightning Rod, glad you enjoyed.

Arcadia, I dig Green Peace. Always wanted to foil whalers in the Rainbow Warrior.

mtmynd, I doubt I could LOL

John

Post by **saw** » February 24th, 2009, 9:03 pm

maxi-alliteration makes this fun, ...when your pockets are empty of love, john, cut a hole in them...ha....not sure if my libido has ever been surrounded by clowns, but am quite sure some of them were insane...
anyway...fun write.....

Post by **hester_prynne** » February 25th, 2009, 2:00 am

Laughing clowns, fantastic image here Myst-er.
I mean, when you put that image in with the brilliant winsome tone of this piece it just works.
Nice goin!
H

Post by **SmileGRL** » February 26th, 2009, 1:19 pm

very clever. and yet a little sad to my ear. trust the universe to send you love, my friend. we all fit somewhere into the ecosystem. it is perfect as it is.

Post by **goldenmyst** » February 28th, 2009, 8:13 pm

Saw, cut a hole in them? Great suggestion! Mine were unilaterally insane.

Hester, I love that word,"winsome". Glad you found the piece ticklish.

SmileGRL, I appreciate your encouragement. I think I'm the lone ranger from here on out, sans Tonto. You eternal optimism, I do so admire.

John

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