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Semblance of Sexuality
Posted: February 22nd, 2009, 11:26 am
by goldenmyst
Mirrored subconscious archetypes
Encircle my libido with laughing clowns
Yet I continue sans sensual
With my pockets empty of love
Waning simulacrum of sanity
Seduces symbiotically
Simple sacraments suffice
For sustainable ecosystem
Posted: February 22nd, 2009, 1:10 pm
by Lightning Rod
neat tongue twister, john
Posted: February 22nd, 2009, 1:10 pm
by Arcadia
kind of green-peace poem g.myst
, I enjoyed it!!!!
Posted: February 22nd, 2009, 1:29 pm
by mtmynd
say that outloud ten times!
good write, John.
Posted: February 24th, 2009, 4:42 pm
by goldenmyst
Lightning Rod, glad you enjoyed.
Arcadia, I dig Green Peace. Always wanted to foil whalers in the Rainbow Warrior.
mtmynd, I doubt I could LOL
John
Posted: February 24th, 2009, 9:03 pm
by saw
maxi-alliteration makes this fun, ...when your pockets are empty of love, john, cut a hole in them...ha....not sure if my libido has ever been surrounded by clowns, but am quite sure some of them were insane...
anyway...fun write.....
Posted: February 25th, 2009, 2:00 am
by hester_prynne
Laughing clowns, fantastic image here Myst-er.
I mean, when you put that image in with the brilliant winsome tone of this piece it just works.
Nice goin!
H
Posted: February 26th, 2009, 1:19 pm
by SmileGRL
very clever. and yet a little sad to my ear. trust the universe to send you love, my friend. we all fit somewhere into the ecosystem. it is perfect as it is.
Posted: February 28th, 2009, 8:13 pm
by goldenmyst
Saw, cut a hole in them? Great suggestion! Mine were unilaterally insane.
Hester, I love that word,"winsome". Glad you found the piece ticklish.
SmileGRL, I appreciate your encouragement. I think I'm the lone ranger from here on out, sans Tonto. You eternal optimism, I do so admire.
John