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he feeds me
Posted: February 25th, 2009, 3:40 pm
by SmileGRL
then aLice, curious as a kitten
opened the biG wooden door
& found the moSt delightful thing
a birdcage in the middLe of the room
fiLLed with kisses in miniature sPoons
(82 to be preciSe)
how odd, she thoughT
& hoW delicious
now if she can only fiNd the key
to set them fRee
what a luCky girl she would bE
Posted: February 25th, 2009, 9:40 pm
by justwalt
Posted: February 26th, 2009, 12:11 pm
by saw
I anoint you the, the modern day Grace Slick, though your poetry is better than her singing, ha....light as air.....
Posted: February 26th, 2009, 2:22 pm
by SmileGRL
walt...oh my gosh, that's the most beautiful bird cage i've ever seen. thank you so much, my friend. you rock!
saw...thank you kindly mr. steve. though i am afraid i'm about to drop something quite heavy on you with my next poem. grace slick...never heard. please share a link to the song you had in mind...
Posted: February 26th, 2009, 5:45 pm
by saw
hey smile...grace slick was the lead singer for Jefferson Airplane, and the song I had in mind was a classic of theirs, White Rabbit....if you google the band and song name there are numerous recordings of them doing it...she was actually a fine singer...and your poem took me back a few years....about thirty.....hope you like it and see the connection..........
Posted: February 26th, 2009, 9:29 pm
by justwalt
Hey Saw, you must be a youngin' yet, White Rabbit was written
somewhere between '65 and '66, and first performed in '66...
43 years ago...the band changed names to Jefferson Starship..
and then to Starship and was at a time the only rock band with
songs in the top ten charts each year for four decades in a row.
walt
Posted: March 1st, 2009, 5:37 pm
by libramoon
She was right here, picking flowers, with that cat of hers, and she disappeared. Fell down a rabbit-hole or some such.
But then I awoke and it was still a lovely spring day. It was just a silly dream.
Grand adventures underground -- next you'll be saying I was whisked off by the Prince of Darkness
to eat pomegrante seeds and rule as his Queen. No, I was just chasing my sweet kitty and got
swept up in some erudite hare's misfortunes. And that, I am certain, was merely based on too much
chocolate cake at the picnic. Thus I fell back, or rather, continued my usual bucolic life with kith
and kin, engaging in furors and trivialities -- until it was time to fall again.
Posted: March 3rd, 2009, 2:07 pm
by SmileGRL
thanks for the song, steve. very cool. alice is quite the artist inspiration.
& thank you miss laurie. alice or not. we fall in and we get up and sometimes (if we pay attention) we get where we are going...
Posted: March 6th, 2009, 10:55 pm
by goldenmyst
SmileGRL, there is a gentle passion and urgency in your poetry which draw me to read you. I feel I come away with new way of seeing the world.
John
Posted: March 9th, 2009, 1:25 pm
by SmileGRL
john, you always make me glad that i shared a poem. thank you for that. because if i only touch one other soul with my words, it's worth it...john, this is me sending you a rainbow of smiles.
