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saw
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Voulez Voulez Voulez Vous

Post by saw » February 27th, 2009, 11:25 am

cover my silhouette in icy powder
mold the fresh flesh of snow
over my amazing features,
pack it tightly so as not to distort
my macho buffness, just encase
me in ice baby, and I'll be
the sexiest snowman alive, yeah
make me the envy of winter,
wanna be the frozen saliva
in a woman's hot mouth, warmed by
the rays of liquid lanacaine sunshine,
cause I'm sick of the routine pain
of matching patterns nine to five, weary
like a veteran fox long in the tooth and cranky,
too horny to see through the fog in the mirror.
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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hester_prynne
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Post by hester_prynne » February 28th, 2009, 9:22 pm

Damn, that last line is killer.
Whole poem is good, but man, talk about blam!
Nice
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by saw » March 1st, 2009, 9:51 am

thanx hester....appreciate the comments ...steve
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by SmileGRL » March 3rd, 2009, 1:09 pm

oh gosh yes! been there...not the macho and such...but there...kinda like you're revved up and deflated at the same time. fRuStratioN. very refreshing in it's honesty...like ice in my soda :wink: juS a liTtle tease to make ya sMiLe mr. saW :mrgreen:

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Post by saw » March 3rd, 2009, 1:34 pm

thank you ms. smile....always good to hear from you.....peace !
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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