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Nice
Posted: March 3rd, 2009, 9:24 am
by saw
I want my niceness
to precede me into the room
wait patiently in the corner
until I need her again
it's okay if you love
my tenacity, but
I really want to be known
for my niceness
Posted: March 3rd, 2009, 9:35 am
by stilltrucking
I suffer from the nice guy syndrome too.
Like Norman Bates I too would not hurt a fly.
I love your poems and I look forward to reading them
but I ramble nonsensically sorry
Posted: March 3rd, 2009, 10:42 am
by saw
well as Led Zeppelin said, Ramble On, thanx truck for the NICE words
Posted: March 3rd, 2009, 11:16 am
by Doreen Peri
Very nice!
Me too.
Posted: March 3rd, 2009, 11:44 am
by mousey1
I like this. It makes me nod my head in agreement.
I like first and foremost to be liked and thought of as nice.
But therein lies the battle of inner wills...
for I often do not feel nice but would rather
tear off a head, or even...dare I say it...spit in an eye!
but only for a moment, then it passes and my niceness shinnies through.
I think that truth should sometimes win over niceness...or not!
But I like to be liked...so therein lies the rub!
Great poem...IT'S NICE!
Posted: March 3rd, 2009, 1:36 pm
by saw
thanx doreen and mousey...you are both too Nice !
Posted: March 5th, 2009, 8:46 pm
by constantine
i'm nice too. i like the brevity and cool tone.
Posted: March 6th, 2009, 5:21 am
by Nazz
Nice is naturally tricky.
Posted: March 6th, 2009, 1:53 pm
by mtmynd
nice is a pleasantry that acts well within the occasion.
nice, saw... very nice. it's nice to read something that's nice.
Posted: March 6th, 2009, 10:57 pm
by goldenmyst
I like to be thought of as nice. Your poem is rad. Great work.
John
Posted: March 9th, 2009, 1:33 pm
by SmileGRL
"nice" is such a silly word, isn't it? and isn't it funny how, with some people, you are always too nice and yet, never nice enough. i know this is happening when i feel a scream linger behind my smile.
saw...i love your latest "series" of poems so honestly exploring your human nature. luv it.