Our Economy---Harsh Medicine

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Lightning Rod
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Our Economy---Harsh Medicine

Post by Lightning Rod » March 20th, 2009, 3:10 pm

Don't take this medicine
just buy this medicine
your medicare and small co-payments
relative to your median income
deducted from your toxic assets
will suffice

but don't take it unless
you are healthy enough for sex
can't stand or sit for more than an hour
rare but serious side effects
can cause priapism, injury or death

ask your doctor, write your senator
this medicine can make your hair fall out
it's harsh medicine
yes, serious medicine
so don't take it, just buy it
and leave it in the medicine chest
for your children to find.
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Post by Spooky Bunny » March 20th, 2009, 4:58 pm

O yeah I really like this.

Great ending statement

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Post by Nazz » March 22nd, 2009, 10:41 pm

"don't take it, just buy it"..

perfect.

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