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my words wound you
Posted: March 20th, 2009, 4:31 pm
by Perdida
my words wound you
the sun chases the moon, and i run
out of letters that hang between us
i just want you to understand
how much
the ocean knows
how it gathers the written kisses
through perpetual windows
that we dare not go into:
kenzo spreads it’s wings
leaving you, lifting me
and i fall
fall into the flowing body of your eyes
like driftwood in a stream
flecks of me
suspended there
waiting:
perhaps
my words wound you
like hard water crashing….
crashing.
Posted: March 20th, 2009, 6:29 pm
by Spooky Bunny
sweet images in here
Posted: March 21st, 2009, 11:48 am
by constantine
it has a smooth warmth and a sense of pathos.
Posted: March 22nd, 2009, 1:37 pm
by Arcadia
kenzo spreads it’s wings
leaving you, lifting me
and i fall
that lines made me smile, gracias perdida!!!!
Posted: March 25th, 2009, 12:56 pm
by SmileGRL
chasing gathering
leaving lifting
falling falling...
flowing flecks
suspended waiting
wounding crashing
crashing. crashing.
healing growing
***
maree...you flow as usual. beautiful, this & you.
hugz
Posted: March 25th, 2009, 1:32 pm
by goldenmyst
Maree, this washed over me like a surreal dream of emotional power. I feel the emotions like a rushing mountain stream as they enfold me.
John
Posted: March 25th, 2009, 9:26 pm
by K&D
Maree, absolutly lovely.
i really like your work, like i want to have a book on my shelf i can just pick up when ever!
Posted: March 25th, 2009, 9:33 pm
by justwalt
I see a spirit speaking the story while gliding over the stream on its way to the ocean...kinda ghostly-like
walt
Posted: March 27th, 2009, 9:59 pm
by hester_prynne
Like a whispered passion.....I just love this one.
H
Posted: March 31st, 2009, 2:24 pm
by Mark Christopher
how it gathers the written kisses
through perpetual windows
that we dare not go into:
fall into the flowing body of your eyes
Exceptional piece and I especially enjoyed the above lines. Poetic gold they are. A unique vision from you is evident and I truely found myself
captured by the words. Well done.
Posted: April 1st, 2009, 6:56 am
by Perdida
Thank you everyone for your kind replies. HUGS.
