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the night air is cool where the wind lives

Posted: April 7th, 2009, 4:29 pm
by sweetwater
on branches mostly made of denim
in bright neon mustaches and curls
the road to tomorrow is awakened

the rest of us admired in fading lights
and round corners crossed at midnight
through long walks in a summer's town waiting

the train ride across the continent
where the night air is cool
where the wind lives

Posted: April 8th, 2009, 2:05 pm
by Yejun
on branches mostly made of denim
in bright neon mustaches and curls
the road to tomorrow is awakened
uh, this is great!

Posted: April 8th, 2009, 10:08 pm
by hester_prynne
Indeed I second Yejun's quoted verse...the whole poem is just really moving...
H 8)

Posted: April 9th, 2009, 10:11 am
by sweetwater
post structural for a post modern civilization

and tongue in cheek

thanks for the irony of your comments

Posted: April 12th, 2009, 6:35 pm
by panta rhei
words are lying down as
long night shadows
along hardened snowdrifts

the train i'm on is moving
across a beautiful landscape
of words and weed

on cold rails
along which only a wind
and my thoughts dare to wander