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water rushes
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 8:59 am
by sweetwater
water rushes through the empty
city and the remains seen
washing over your thoughts
are free in the flowing
to flower the future
with a presence knowing
the day is full of surprises
Posted: April 11th, 2009, 5:50 pm
by Nazz
Interesting. Without us the city is empty and future not conceived. That was my first take.
Posted: April 12th, 2009, 6:31 pm
by panta rhei
in this town the rain sounds
like voiceless consonants in the washing tide
like ambivalent vowels in hollows and gulps
the tales are ancient like gargoyled waters
whispering through the jester's lips
and someone is drowning
and someone is flowing
to flower the future
and the oracle blows
blearing rings into a
present puddle
of surprise
Posted: April 18th, 2009, 3:26 pm
by Nazz
like that moment right after a downpour,
concrete puddles staring up through canyons,
fresh in their spring twilight underworld,
too fresh even for the oil to rise,
for a moment, if only
for a moment.