Dave Brubeck on a rainy sunday afternoon

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preston
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Dave Brubeck on a rainy sunday afternoon

Post by preston » September 5th, 2004, 1:06 pm

She stands fluid in a shaft of pale moonlight
Stylishly attired
Yet with a plain and simple bearing
A welcome sight
In this landscape of wanton excess

Not quite a damsel in distress
More, a lady in need of assistance
Unacquainted with the realities of solitary passage
And I, not quite a knight in shining armor
More, a passing stranger who stops to lend a hand

I take her arm,
And lead her to the safety of a well lit doorway
Where we stand in silence
And take of measure each other
And this evolving scene

A reenactment of so many chance encounters
Which could yet go either way
So I add laughter in the distance
And strains of sparse piano jazz
From a little cafe just down the way

Where we make our way hurriedly
Pausing for a moment at the corner
Where not content to wait
We take each others hand and cross against the light
Anxious now to see what lies ahead

A table in the corner
With an unobstructed view
Where just beyond her profile
A trio of nameless musicians
Take the stage

And here it all begins to fall apart
This rainy daydream fading
Into convoluted melodies
And non-chromatic phrasings
Once again

hester_prynne

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Post by hester_prynne » September 6th, 2004, 1:16 pm

preston, I really like this.
all the way to the end, which is even more fantastic.
nice work
H

preston
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Post by preston » September 7th, 2004, 9:03 am

thanks H

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Post by Lightning Rod » September 7th, 2004, 9:17 am

I like this one, preston
it's got story and a great forlorn rhythm
good work

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Re: Dave Brubeck on a rainy sunday afternoon

Post by dadio » December 6th, 2013, 5:15 am

8) Enjoyed

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