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Dave Brubeck on a rainy sunday afternoon

Posted: September 5th, 2004, 1:06 pm
by preston
She stands fluid in a shaft of pale moonlight
Stylishly attired
Yet with a plain and simple bearing
A welcome sight
In this landscape of wanton excess

Not quite a damsel in distress
More, a lady in need of assistance
Unacquainted with the realities of solitary passage
And I, not quite a knight in shining armor
More, a passing stranger who stops to lend a hand

I take her arm,
And lead her to the safety of a well lit doorway
Where we stand in silence
And take of measure each other
And this evolving scene

A reenactment of so many chance encounters
Which could yet go either way
So I add laughter in the distance
And strains of sparse piano jazz
From a little cafe just down the way

Where we make our way hurriedly
Pausing for a moment at the corner
Where not content to wait
We take each others hand and cross against the light
Anxious now to see what lies ahead

A table in the corner
With an unobstructed view
Where just beyond her profile
A trio of nameless musicians
Take the stage

And here it all begins to fall apart
This rainy daydream fading
Into convoluted melodies
And non-chromatic phrasings
Once again

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Posted: September 6th, 2004, 1:16 pm
by hester_prynne
preston, I really like this.
all the way to the end, which is even more fantastic.
nice work
H

Posted: September 7th, 2004, 9:03 am
by preston
thanks H

Posted: September 7th, 2004, 9:17 am
by Lightning Rod
I like this one, preston
it's got story and a great forlorn rhythm
good work

lr

Re: Dave Brubeck on a rainy sunday afternoon

Posted: December 6th, 2013, 5:15 am
by dadio
8) Enjoyed