oh that crow

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keithalanhamilton
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oh that crow

Post by keithalanhamilton » May 10th, 2009, 12:10 pm

oh that crow
cawing to be heard
reminding the listener
in a spiritual sense
magic and creativity
dwell in life’s activity
where opportunity
awaits its seeker
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Yejun
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Post by Yejun » May 16th, 2009, 5:38 pm

Hmmm, an epigram?

What about making it shorter?
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Post by still.trucking » May 16th, 2009, 5:58 pm

I need to get more active.

Thinking seems passive
but I suppose this is activity too.
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Post by keithalanhamilton » May 18th, 2009, 8:56 am

Yejun: Hmmm, an epigram?

Not intentionally or any more then this http://www.studioeight.tv/phpbb/viewtopic.php?t=16442 being an elegy.

Just being me :D
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