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De-Peak
Posted: May 11th, 2009, 11:30 pm
by hester_prynne
Graceful de-peak
in the monster stage.
My want for peace
is disabling.
Slowin up my wheels.
No U-turns.
It's all downhill
from here.
Walkin sideways,
palms out,
fronded,
for balance.
Looking back,
is uninteresting.
Up ahead,
there still
might be a dream.
Posted: May 11th, 2009, 11:41 pm
by judih
lookin within, there's a dream
a fat, luscious dream
it's got wings and berries
sound effects and pearly earrings
twinkling in the mind
Posted: May 12th, 2009, 4:35 pm
by Nazz
Beauty and grace
even among monsters.
"palms out,
fronded,
for balance".
Love that.
Posted: May 13th, 2009, 9:41 pm
by constantine
i like this a lot, hester. i think it is one of the best that i've read of yours.
Posted: May 13th, 2009, 10:56 pm
by mtmynd
inspired, hes'... truly.
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Posted: May 23rd, 2009, 12:04 am
by saw
dreams are we have at times, to keep us breathing, eating, drinking,
the possibility of something better than this can be a great motivator.....the fantasy perhaps better than the reality when we actually achieve it, but then there is a new dream.....enjoyed, hester
Posted: May 28th, 2009, 11:12 am
by SmileGRL
"my want for peace
is disabling"
...on so many levels for me...as always with reading you, hester.
Posted: May 30th, 2009, 7:17 pm
by Yejun
Don't laugh but I see a crab walking sideways. I think it must be the influence of Constatine's poem. I'm not sure how it can see forward or backward.
Posted: June 1st, 2009, 12:35 pm
by .Lucy.
Hmmm...
Making the wheels of thought turn within me, Hes...
Great to see your work!