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Axanderdeath
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life

Post by Axanderdeath » May 19th, 2009, 11:21 pm

i am not trying to impress
you are not impressed
nor am I

cough
sniff

shiver in you apathy
that shelters you
that shelters us
I am shelter
I am a horrible thought that
brings on a gag
that stops the heart

death is not special
everybody dies
when your in your box
and i am in mine
this truth flows over you
like a river of shame

the heat is stifeling
repugnate eyes
peer to far for you to see
you feel it
we feel each others thoughts
alone but never really

alone but never really

so sit cross legged and
hang your head
and
breathe
thus spoke G.A.P.

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Nazz
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Post by Nazz » May 20th, 2009, 1:08 am

Life = Death.

breathe.

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Axanderdeath
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Post by Axanderdeath » May 20th, 2009, 8:56 am

thus spoke G.A.P.

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Post by Arcadia » May 20th, 2009, 9:32 pm

eating almonds at this precise moment, enjoy! :)

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Post by hester_prynne » May 20th, 2009, 10:51 pm

You blow me away.
Fantastic read.
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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